fourchinnigan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[U.G.A.M. preview]

You Cock Tease...

Blah blah blah, it probably belongs in the alphas section, but I won't bother with that. It does actually have more worth than your average teaser. Looks like a nice movie. I really dig the title. It is the sort of caustic commentary I enjoy and often attempt to employ. I enjoy your style, you are a talented artist. A little more time optimizing your images may make them a tad cleaner looking, that would be my only criticism visually. I hope to see this come to fruition in the near future. Now, go put an alpha up until then.

[Smash Bros. X]

Nice Change...(coolcool)

It's nice to see a movie based on video game characters that isn't merely sprite-ripping. I really appreciate it that you took the time to draw and animate your own renditions of the characters, which looked quite nice. This was well put together and I'd like to see the additions whenever they come. This ranks at the top of video game movies in my book, even above VGDC.

[Kong]

Skills...

I remember watching "Blanco y Negro" long ago and thinking it was fantastic. Yet, flash-based animation has improved drastically since then. I'm glad to see Razzo has as well. Although, some of the movements were a tad awkward at times, overall the motion was very well done. The segues were nice and clever (especially the part with the phones). The mood was ominous and well conveyed. The artwork was top-notch and all the scenes fit together into a cohesive entertaining whole. I hope you keep it up. Your work keeps getting better.

[Mr.T vs Bin Laden]

Overrated

Things I like:
Mr. T, the A-Team theme song, Optimus Prime.

Things I didn't like:
Terrible animation (motion tweening is not that difficult to do correctly and easily), badly edited bitmaps, crappy scene transistions, lame murder scene, lazy word ballooning, gratuitous spelling errors, and everything else not listed under things I like.

If this were not about killing Bin Laden, it would be rated drastically lower. Try again.

[TMP's are not Toys]

You have talent

The explosion animation was superb. That component in itself was enough to boost your score. You have a damn good sense of timing and you are a very good animator. I am very surprised by your age. You have a future somewhere and I wouldn't mind working with you one day. You also seem to have a nice sense of humor and design. Kudos. Now go finish Project Saiyan, you damn adolescent slacker.

[College University pt 1]

Great

This is one of the best movies on Newgrounds. It is also much more funny than anything you find on most professional sites like Romp.com. If I were to create a short list of Newgrounds artists I would like to collaborate with, you guys would be at the top.

[College University pt 2]

Great like before

I loved the first one and this one was at least as good, maybe better. The jokes are always good jokes and dead on. I recognize that Bigfoot motif music 'though. Funny to see it in someone else's movie. My only complaint would be that sometimes it looked like you slacked on graphics and animation, but overall it was great. Those dorms are exactly like the ones at LSU. That's scary.
Keep it up.

[A Nightcity Story]

Stupendous

This is fantastic. Nice artstyle and animation. The parts with his head moving up and down even gave the illusion of 3D. The only problem I see is on some of the line quality. Deleting a few extra points in your outline fills would have smoothed out your lines more. Regardless, this is the best flash noir piece I have seen. I'll be back to see the rest.

[Brutality]

nice

This piece was well put together and obviously swallowed a large portion of the creator's life. The energy attack effects were very well done. They were smoothly animated and effective, as well as interesting. The character designs were rather nice, although a bit too reminiscent of Toriyama. This is forgivable, especially since you did him justice. The character animations were often very fluid, although at times a bit awkward. Overall, although, the animation was of a very high-caliber, well above your normal Newgrounds fare. My only true complaint would be the sound. I do not think the music choices accentuated the piece well. Also, you are in definite need of sound effects. Everything would seem much more exciting and powerful with explosions and yells. My advice would be to remaster the audio and re-submit. With the proper audio, this entry is a ten easy.

I find it a bit funny that I was vote 666.

[saiyan test]

will be nice

The animation was fantastic. You have a definite future here. I would be very interested in seeing a finished product. Note the file size. This was merely 20 secs tops and 416K with no sound. You are going to have to learn to optimize better if you want to make longer movies. Also, I think you should have put this in the Alphas section. The portal isn't for teasers. I understand that you want feedback, but you are going to get bombed for this by those folks who are using dial-ups and waited a while for this to load. When you deliver a finished product, I will be here to review it. If this is any indication of what is to come, I am sure I will be highly impressed and entertained. Good luck.